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Love the tongue. Your art has really improved.
(Im so sorry I havnt been commenting lately. I need to get on more often, Im currently sifting through 800 some deviations and journals. It's nice to see you've submitted alot of good stuff since I've last looked. ^__^ )
The face looks like it ought to be a little longer, maybe a little narrower. The folds look nice where the shirt's pulled up, but it would look more natural if they gathered in the hand over the thumb.
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And it all comes back to MANHIPS. That body is really something. I-I think my nose is bleeding... D:
Thanks so much for the critique!